Undeniably, traveling can always loosen people up, but sometimes it can also make people gloomy. When I finished my high entrance exam, my parents took me to Beijing in that summer, and the fact is that I often take this trip now as I become a part-time tour guide in my holiday.
用一個Undeniably做為開頭，首先對【旅行這件事兒】做了一個系統闡述——旅行確實可以讓人開心，但是有時候也能讓人很SAD……然后就按時間點開始說在XX時候的時候，這樣的總分說法，比你們一上來就【when I was XXX】是不是要高級不少呢?
As a matter of fact, that trip is the one that I can never forget in my whole life because every time when I think about it, I feel disgusted. Beijing is one of the most famous tourist cities in China. However, there is a kind of special traveling group in Beijing. We call that trip exploring universities. Middle school students from all over China will be pushed by their parents to visit some top universities in Beijing. And what they can visit in Beijing is only universities. You can imagine how boring the trip is. Unluckily, I used to be one of them.
而unluckily,I used to be one of them這樣地道又俏皮的說話方式，也很容易引起考官的好感呢~
同時注意本段中 be pushed by 這種用法，也是非常地道，也充分反映出了自己的不滿。其實，雅思口語考試并不一定一味地需要高級詞匯，有幾個亮眼詞匯，就已經足夠。
Well, my parents and I spent a whole day in Beijing, and visited 8 universities there. We saw 8 campuses in so-called distinct styles. For me, in fact they were all the same. And we even visited some classroom buildings, dorms, canteens, gyms and so on. From my point of view, what I should have visited is some tourist attractions like the Great wall and Summer Palace, but the truth was that this short trip really made me down. I could see the same disappointment from all other young guys. On the contrary, our parents were all excited about what they saw, and they kept imagining that one day their kids can study there.
本段中的亮眼句當然是【I could see the same disappointment from all other young guys.】然后再說家長們都很興奮地在幻想孩子們以后在大學入讀的情況。這種反差，即使在考官看來，也是十分有趣的一種經歷，畢竟，歪果仁的好(八)奇(卦)心可一點不比我們少!
on the contrary，又一個地道用法，即使用在作文中也會加分。
Provided who has visited a certain university can get more possibility to receive an offer from this university, there is no doubt that I can visit it every day. Howbeit, the fact is this kind of trip is totally meaningless.
在經過了幾段簡單的敘述之后，結尾段終于放大招啦!配合從句進行了對此次旅游的總結，并陳述出【如果說參觀大學就能獲得錄取通知書，那我可以每天都去看啊~】這樣的觀點，同時用the fact is this kind of trip is totally meaningless這樣的句子來呼應一開始【disgusted】。簡直想不給高分都困難呢。